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| Seize the Day 2007-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseI agree with this in every aspect. No matter how hard to bear or handle, hearing the truth will always be the best thing possible. Ver well written, nothing excess or unnecessary. |
| Duck Tape Girl 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuse*is in shock* i think this is one of the best poems i have read... ever! i love it... is it ok if i copy it down to put on my wall? i'll wait for a reply before i do that though. well... keep writing...i really do love this poem... |
| Lisa98 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abusei like this. but it reminds me awfully of a Shell Silverstein poem. Tell me I'm clever. Tell me I'm kind. Tell me I'm talented. Tell me I'm cute. Tell me I'm sensitive, graceful, and wise. Tell me I'm perfect, But tell me the truth. I don't know if that is what you were aiming for or if it just happened to be so similar. But it's still good! just a lot the same : ) my favorite was the first stanza by far |