Hm. Very interesting poem. Can this possibly be dedicated to a certain Arceron maybe? If so, I applaud you for typing this and posting it in fanfiction. I'm impressed by it really...this really captures a certain family member I know and hold dearly. If it really is for that Arceron...then you must have really captured his persona perfectly in this. I suppose this is what most people would think of him..."cold as winter"...Hm.
Anyways, I enjoyed your poem. It sparked an intrest in me.

~Rose~

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