Greetings,
I like this one the best. I thought it would be pointless to properly review all four so seeing as I like this one best I shall drop a paragraph long review. It seems like a sad sort of poem... oh I suck at this. I always write the stupidest most obvious things. It's obvious that you're talented and I'm pretty sure that you are aware of that fact as you are looking to publish something (I looked at your profile) so why do you need me to tell you?
Meh. Common mystery, people like praise.
ANYWAY I was going to say something useful: out of the four things that you wrote the last was the easiest to understand for me, it tells the story of someone defeated in my minds eye and the way it sets the mood is good, don't know why but I really like it. The third piece I didn't like because it was just to sad, I can just get a picture of someone desperate to hold on to a love, so much so that they appear stalker-ish. From an unbiased point of view (as I don't like sad things) it was actually very good, expressive...
I'm going to stop before I write something redundant that makes no sense whatsoever and virtually serves no purpose but to annoy the reader.
In conclusion to this essay, your work is great and generally awesome. But you don't need me to tell you that.
-Seraphic Deviltry