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| EmilyAlice10 2007-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this. for a first poem it's really good! slightly, i dont know, like the lines seemed a little robotic towards the second to last stanza, but the last one was really god! so glad you finally put a poem up on here! you should put more! I love how it starts, especially with the sound reference. That really works for you. anyone, great job! keep writing! |