I don't why, but that made me smile. :] Instead of the person being all heartbroken and waiting, they take the situation into their own hands and decide to move on. Atleast, that's how I interpreted it. Overall, good job. I like your style, it's just so refreshing & different from the norm.

hm... well, a fresh scar is really damaging one's understanding...

nice...

I like how you bolded Stop. It adds to the haiku I think, which, by the way, is great.

The flow works really well for this piece and I love the words you've chosen. The "Stop" at the end of line two really makes the poem jump out from the paper; especially since its written in bold. Nicely done! Thanks for the reviews!

Good flow and words. Very well done.

-C.N

Excellent sound and flow. Well done.