|Reviews for Xnay on Angerday, s'il vous plaît|
| mk 4/4/13 . chapter 20
I absolutely love this story! This is my tenth time reading it!
| csorciere 3/4/13 . chapter 20
I have had so much fun with these. I see that you started Jess' story with Calc, but I noticed that is has been over a year since it was updated and I don't want to get started on it and get hooked like I have been with V, W, and X.
I have truly enjoyed this little world that you have created. It has been a lot of fun and I have laughed quite a bit. Hopefully, one day you will find the time or inspiration to complete Jess' story. In the meantime though, thank you for sharing these stories with us. They are a lot of fun to spend time with.
| R. Ficst 2/6/13 . chapter 20
Absolutely adore this story. June is a fantastic character. Your world-building is quite interesting as well. Awesome work, thanks so much for posting!
| TheMoltenWindow 1/21/13 . chapter 20
Love for this story. Pure love.
It's the second time I've read it in a day :) I hope your happy because you've successfully distracted me from any possible work ;)
Matty may well be my favorite male character on fictionpress or fanfiction, and they're so good as a couple :)
Thank you for posting the story.
| CaliGurl2007 1/2/13 . chapter 20
I love this one too..I really wish you would finish Jessica's story.
| Bluterav 10/30/12 . chapter 20
Damn it but this was good.
| Redz 8/15/12 . chapter 4
"Au revoire, mon pauvre telefone." pauvre goes before telefone. Anyway, good story. I'm enjoying it.
| DA-chen1 7/30/12 . chapter 1
Great! Haha.. so sweet, her stammering! :-)
| No name 7/21/12 . chapter 20
I loved it
| fellintothemoon 7/17/12 . chapter 1
Hey there! This is Melissa from ADoR. We've been rewriting all of our old reviews and I've just rewritten yours! Here is your review:
Melissa Thinks: June is different from the normal supernatural creatures we see. She's half vampire half werewolf: a hybrid. Her life seems rather dull, but she seems to get by with her two best friends, Jess, a vampire hunter, and Marguerite, a life witch. When a weird bracelet gets stuck around her wrist, she starts attracting all sorts of trouble; and not the good kind.
I was sucked in from the very beginning of this story. With it's addicting plot and great voice, who wouldn't be attracted to it. Jun was an interesting character to read about. While some stories tend to make their female supernatural characters hardened and tough, June was different. There was actually a scene where she stuttered around a guy she like; that shows how unique she is to this genre. To me, the story never dragged or got tedious as some others do. It was short and satisfying along with funny and imaginative. I absolutely loved the relationship between June and Matt. It was real and although Matt seemed to be a bit cold at first, his character developed and softened out. It's an adventure supernatural story that'll keep you on the edge of your seat with its plot twists and crazy characters.
| wmichgee 7/10/12 . chapter 20
i really liked your story.
| Grape 7/8/12 . chapter 20
This was an amazing story! Loved it!
| carleyshake 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Awwww it's amazing!
| salex13 5/27/12 . chapter 20
I've recently read all three of your completed stories over the course of a few weeks, so I guess this is more of a review of all of your stories in general.
I am actually very pleasantly surprised by your level of writing. Have you ever considered getting published?
There is a very structured organization to your stories, which is very rare on FictionPress - it's clear you do some level of planning ahead, bravo.
One tiny thing I'd like to point out is that the mannerisms and behaviours and ways of speech of a few of your characters are too similar, especially June and Kate. They seem more like the same person going through two separate adventures. Oh, and some of the french... made me wince a little. :P but that's minor details.
In general, well done. Your stories are original, the plot lines are refreshing and original. The dialogue is very lively and witty, which I enjoyed immensely. And your plot twists are actually very surprising and drives the plot! Well done!
Keep writing. Doesn't have to be on FP, but just keep writing in general. You have great potential.
| A 5/24/12 . chapter 20
Adore. Love. Read right through in one sitting. The ending was perfect.