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| Nightmarish Waltz 2007-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery cute, I like the twist at the end. (The little girl sounds a bit like me) |
| Jen H.M. 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! I love the twist at the end. |
| Ghost in the Dark 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWith this in "humor" genre I should ahve expected that ending... but didn't, so I giggled. Really, it seems all serious in the middle with the mother's musings and telling her daughter how hard it would be to be Mary-Jane... and then the daughter just drops a bomb-shell. "I'm Spider-Man." indeed. Good poem. |
| DeeFective 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAw. This is such a lovable poem. I loved it, loved it, loved it! Great job. |