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Reviews For: Mary Jane
Nightmarish Waltz 2007-07-07 . chapter 1
Very cute, I like the twist at the end.
(The little girl sounds a bit like me)
Jen H.M. 2007-07-05 . chapter 1
Wonderful! I love the twist at the end.
The Ghost Drowned 2007-07-04 . chapter 1
With this in "humor" genre I should ahve expected that ending... but didn't, so I giggled. Really, it seems all serious in the middle with the mother's musings and telling her daughter how hard it would be to be Mary-Jane... and then the daughter just drops a bomb-shell.

"I'm Spider-Man." indeed.

Good poem.
DeeFective 2007-07-04 . chapter 1
Aw. This is such a lovable poem. I loved it, loved it, loved it! Great job.
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