haha, really funny and cute...loved it...though it fluffy it was one of a kind fluff...absolutely loved it!

Wow! This is super cute! I love cliches! This is very well written! I love it absolutely!

I loved this so much. Not only are there, like, a trillion-zillion stories that cover something like what she goes through (if you waded through that grammar nightmare and made it to the other side, good job!), but... I think deep down we all want that. So, on both fronts it's just, like, great. And so, so funny.

Hahahaha very amusing and sweet :] And the writing fit really nicely - loved it!

Hahaha...I love how every scenario ends with a ravishing at some random location!

I read two of your stories so far and saw the summary for another one - do you have a thing for guy names that start with 'T'? (I'm curious because I recently noticed that I have a hard time coming up with male names other than those that begin with 'J' or 'K'!)

Great job!
- Rebekah

aw, this is so cute. all the time, she's just like, "ravishing, ravishing, ravishing." and he goes, "well, how about I ravish you" lol. i loved it.

This was hilarious! Definitely a great job...it was so much fun to read. Especially the blatant cliche-ness of the ending. :)

Pretty good...but you forgot the whole best friend's brother and boss/employee thing =D. Forgive me, I just couldn't resist.

Great work,
E.

BWAHAHA.
"And then he ravishes me--"
Dude, those were brilliant. You made fun of the cliches (as much as I love them anyway) and it turn out amazing.
Wonderful story.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i love that whole "and then he ravishes me" thing
that's so hilarious
this whole thing was uber hilarious
in a totally cute way
which i totally love
and i shall add it to favourites because of that reason haha
its too cute
and its too cliche
but its so awesome like that!
i loved it!!

izzie

That's cute. Cliches are just so hard to avoid these days... I love how you went around it though. :)

I love this! It's adorable, and made me smile :)

I laughed out loud so many times during this - especially at all the 'ravishing' bits. My brother thinks I'm crazy because I'm supposed to be studying, but oh well. Thank you so much for a great laugh as well as a very cute romance! =)

Haha, I didn't realize this was a one-shot until I reached the very end. Very nice and sweet story. ^ ^

haha, i like this story! most likely because i am inexplicably drawn to cliched plots and romanticised stories, so i recognise a number of these plotlines(: