Oh my god!! This was such a funny one-shot...awesome piece. Great work! :P

hahah thats hilarious =]
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Funny.

Man. That would suck! Only you could come up with something this weird >.>

LOL..you know i always thought about that too! that would suck because you have to hold off on the whole marriage consummation thing..but hey! nice story!

Period on her WEDDING DAY? Shit! How awful!

god that was a wierd thing to write bout (periods on ur wedding day! L0L) but it was funny so keep up the gud work!

I never really have much thought to such disasters on my future wedding day but everything in here is very realistic. I was a little confused at first about who was dreaming what but I think I understood by the end.
Now I'm worried about my own wedding day.

Congrats to your friend!

Head bridsmaid= maid of honor

There are some way long phrases (especially the one where the bride shows her dress,it needs a dot somewhere).

I'm a bit confused as who was dreaming what... Were both Celeste and Cole dreaming or did Cole dreamed that Celeste dreamed? O.o

I do love the way the events unfold, the crazy clock (whoever got it should be kicked out of the wedding), and how the dream ends up a bit of a premonition (although who knows how far it will be the same).
It's light reading since it's short, and the character's emotions are easy to follow.

I do love all the little details of things that could go wrong in an unexpected way.

Thank you for the present. I'm getting married tomorrow. Thank god, I don't have my periods until monday! ;)

Hihi...funny dude! Oh you mispelled marital...it's marital sex not martial sex...eww mental image. Good one-shot!

Oh dear, period on your wedding day...that can be white a trouble :D
A really cute funny-for-me-but-not-for-the-bride one-shot!

Give your friend Cecile my best wishes and tell her I'm kepping my fingers crossed that everything will go just perfectly on her wedding!

__Tina__

Classic humor, haha.

hahaha that was a cute little story. I would be mortified if that ever happened to me but still a funny situation!

-still giggling like a hyena on speed-
No, I have no idea how to spell hyena >>

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