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| Sirius Blaak 2007-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseomg, that was so sweet! i loved how you tied in all the things your father has done for you over the years and encouraged him to keep going. it's a very loving poem, and if your dad hasn't seen it yet, you should show it to him. :) |
| Ramenluver 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I love reading poems about loved ones. It brings out the best in people. I love the last lines when you said:You have the most important job in this entire room. You’re my father. Lovely. It means so much more when people write about those they adore. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing my poem. And since you say you've been known to camp out in front of your computer to read a story, maybe you can check mine out. It's called Ariana, Be Forgotten. It's fantasy. It kinda sucks. So have patience. It grows on you. That is, if your not Lccorp2...(don't ask)He's a flamer... And he burns alot. |
| The Postscript 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, wonderful sentiments. You capture the very esscence of love, and leave me speechless. Awesome work. Keep writing, k. |