Did you die again you slag? And you didn't even enter the ficathon.I am so ashamed of you.

This is by far the sickest and the weirdest (and the funniest XD) thing I've ever read! You shoulda made it longer! :D

wow, i fucking love this story. period.

aww this was so cute!! =)

Generally well-written, though I think it would be better if this was rated M. xD Pretty good, and an awesome addition from clumsy eloQuence 6 to our c2. (:

I loved it, this was hilarious and I like their interactions with each other. I paused at that obstreperous word too I was like 'huh... it is,' ditto with prurient lol, but hey I was amused, got a hot kiss scene and learned something all in one go. And on fictionpress at that.

But yeah, the community sounds extremely interesting, is it going to be part of a series of one-shots? Like a bunch of seperate one-shots set up in Carnal Cover? Just asking because you put a bit of information in setting the background of the town up for us and I think the story would've worked even without that backstory.

bahahha i love it!

Alright alright, here's your review!

I like the way you've written your story. Alot of humour, very fun. Oh, and the whole "‘aw-look-they’re-arguing-again-how-cute’ thing." :P
The ditzy sister is UNBELIEVABLE. But it adds to the humour, so woo.

Awesome story.

Oh btw, I've recommended your story to a whole lot of people, and everyone who's read it so far have said- uh, not too much. Their mouths were hanging open :P
(They're just really bad reviewers, heh.)

Spread forth thy skills and put the bar a little higher, Young 'Un.

Peace.

This, my dear, was the most fucked up cute thing I have read yet. At first, I thought it was going to be a new story seeing as you're about ready to fire a bazooka at Nikita, but it was just a one-shot.

I like Callie way better than Nikita. She has spunk. The idea of Carnal Cove is pretty interesting. You should expand on it. But you'd lose gas pretty fast.

Anyway, I just got back from hell. AKA Vacation W/ My Grandmother. It was like ten fucking o'clock, and she turned off the damn telly because she couldn't get to sleep. So, I turn it back on, and she starts cursing at me, so I just ignore her, and continue to watch telly for two more hours because there was no fucking computer within a 100 mile radius.


Oh, guess what. You didn't write that review you said you were going to. I don't hate you though. Cause this was incredibly entertaining once I actually got into it.

Other than that, my brain is mush, and i'll probably be leaving in a couple days again for nationals hell. Oh, and I visit my optomistrist from hell tomorrow. Damn bitch can't keep her mouth shut.

So, I think I'll go now. I have the sudden urge to write something, we'll see how screwed up I can make it be.