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| DramaQueenMaureen 2007-11-18 ch 5,  | abuseUPDATE NOW, MISSY! |
| invizygirl 2007-11-06 ch 5, | abuseaww cute but kinda sappy. update soon. |
| SAM! 2007-10-28 ch 5, anon. | abuseHAHAHA I'M SAM!! You need to put more of ME in here!! But about the actual story...graduation! Sad!! Ohmigod, I cried...I practically cried just reading this. Sniff. Ahh, Chorus Award!! I love my plaque...I laughed when I read that my last name was Delacruz...I sound all Spanish-y! You should've made it Martha's last name! This is a really long, rambling review, but I guess it can make up for all those other chapters I didn't review, because you didn't TELL me you were writing this! Agh! Oh well, I forgive you. |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-10-22 ch 5, | abuseI have one thing to say (that's a lie lol) OREO!! Lmao omg that made me laugh so hard "i graduated" GOOD TIMES You write Candace so in character, like her saying honey and stuff...so me...she is me...not the point lol Stupid Anthony Lol Park likes when I hug him if you see other pictures of graduation my blue-eyed friend.= THAT'S ME! Omg god/sad times Update soon! |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-09-26 ch 4, | abuseomg, emma i |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-09-26 ch 4, | abuseOMG THAT HOT TUB WAS SO DAMN FUN Katie is annoying as hell lol Um me and Chealsea didnt get lost and you forgot that i took my shirt off on the street...wait no its a good thing u left that out lol Yeah all that didnt last...for you...for me that day it got better...sorry |
| invizygirl 2007-09-25 ch 4, | abusesad last line but funny ** chapter. luved the hot tub thing. great work. |
| MysteriousSmile43 2007-09-21 ch 3, | abuseWOOT CHAPTER 3 I cant wait 4 more I love the summary btw...I remember that song, idc what your name here says its AMAZING |
| PrincessRina<3 2007-09-05 ch 3, anon. | abusedang. you remember all this, i forgot some details. O__O haha. anyways. this chapter was an exceptionally awesome one, hehe library meetings. ^-^;; ugh.. katie and briana... freaking katie. -_-;; so much drama cause of herr. =[. |
| PrincessRina<3 2007-09-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseyea. i agree. names should be confusing for other people. =] but dood. this story's god. anyways. i just wanted to read it over cause i forgot what happened. LOL. and i wanted to review. =]. love you ema. |
| EmilyAlice10 2007-08-26 ch 3, | abuseWow, you wrote a LOT today! a girl you know? lol, I |
| invizygirl 2007-08-26 ch 3, | abusethis was a really cute chapter. i liked this one a lot. excellent job! update soon! |
| invizygirl 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abusethis chapter seems to be a little cluttered. it gives me a lot of names that i dont know about. aside from that its great though. it gives us a brief overview of the main character's schedule thus telling us a little about her likes and dislikes. good. |
| invizygirl 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abusegood start but there is something i'm confused on. first you say "Him meaning Anthony Brown," then later you say "Anthony Scott, he’s a difficult person to describe. " are these seperate people? im kind of confused. onto the next chapter! |
| Martha loves emma 2007-08-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseIm loving it so far...god where have i heard this stroy? heheheh...okay update soon im very excited...and um where is this wondeful cadace girl i like her lol me cool |