Reviews for Challenge Twenty Six

Reviews For: Challenge Twenty Six - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Motoko 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseOriginality: Henred5 Mechanics:Black Cat Best:Myriad
ylaenek 2007-07-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseMech: Laurel Whitney Orig: Stardust Best: Henred5
henred5 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abuseMechanics:- Myriad Originality:- Ylaomi Best:- BlackCat Well that's my votes in, there were some pretty weird stories, for this challenge.
henred5 2007-07-28 ch 8,	abuseAww, Ben sounds cute, though I wonder if the whole ‘drawing faces on eggs thing’ is some sort of curse, or just a crazy thing he likes to do. Very enjoyable – in fact quite original. Though I am ever so slightly confused on the wedding bit, so I guess I’ll have to go back and read your past instalments….
henred5 2007-07-28 ch 7,	abuseOne long short story – and you call it short? Hang on, you didn't. BAH! Its like a mini mini mini novel…lols, but I still loved reading it. Occasional bad spelling – but I think they were just typos. An interestingly crazy sci-fi plot, it was a bit confusing, so I read bits and pieces again to get the hang of the characters and plot.
henred5 2007-07-28 ch 6,	abuseWhat? This sounds like a small chunk of a bigger story…and I’m not too sure I like Marian – ah well. Still quite interesting, not many spelling errors here…maybe one or two. I don’t get the whole point of the morning or the chat they had, shame though, sounds good so far if it is for a bigger story. Love the 'Birds of a feather flock together' bit, very original.
henred5 2007-07-27 ch 9,	abuseGrammer needs a work on, I mean how can you be so bad at grammer? That is a good question henred5...a very good one indeed. Anyway, thank you for the pointers and thankies Giraffie, you are awesome.
henred5 2007-07-27 ch 5,	abuseAn interesting story piece, I loved the original idea of humans being able to communicate with animals – and then the added ‘well done’ with calling it faunamancers, I just wonder how you came up with the name. Excellent mechanics, quite original interesting plot.
henred5 2007-07-27 ch 4,	abuse‘Necromancer,’ have you been reading Sabriel…or Libriel by Garth Nix? Lolls I recognize this character from the battle he and red had, excellent ideas…with the zombie dinosaurs and TC as the main character…what a robot/cyborg.
henred5 2007-07-27 ch 3,	abuseThat was very well written, mechanics wise. Also a very angst story. Truly tragic. As one might say, one being me. The storyline and plot is quite original that is written incredibly well, I just wonder why she became Adam’s girlfriend in the first place, was there even a spark?
henred5 2007-07-27 ch 2,	abuseAn interesting piece, very imaginative – I’m guessing you were just literally taking out thoughts from your head and putting them onto paper. Quite a few mis-spellings and typing errors probably created because you may have been tired. Other then that I do really think the story inside this story could become a great (yet crazy) book to read. After all, the weird can be the wonderful too. I’m confused, did Ylea make this whole thing up – or did it actually happen?
Giraffie (Marli Coulupe) 2007-07-26 ch 9, anon.	abuseYay, I'm actually voting! Hehe... Anyways, tough call this round. Everyone did really well... Mechanics:Swing, Swing, by Stardust Originality: Illiterate, by Myriad Best Overall: A Fighter's Freedom, by Henred5 (Nyrt! Something about this one made me want to read it again and again...=D)
Elizabeth Anne Ensley 2007-07-26 ch 1,	abuseMy votes. Tough call, but... —Mechanics— A Small Interlude In My Otherwise Crazy Life By: BlackCat —Originality— Swing, Swing By Stardust —Best—The overall best story; A Small Interlude In My Otherwise Crazy Life By: BlackCat
Elizabeth Anne Ensley 2007-07-26 ch 6,	abuseIt's a dormouse, rather than a doormouse. Still, cute. ;-)
Elizabeth Anne Ensley 2007-07-26 ch 4,	abuseCute. The protagonist didn't really have much of anything to overcome, but it was still cute.

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