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| Reviews for Youth |
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   Ashelin 7/9/07 . chapter 1I liked how this was in past tense. It gave off the feeling that freedom once was and can never be again. Great haiku. |
| Basara 7/8/07 . chapter 1 mecury... hm... nice... |
| Moondog Dozier 7/5/07 . chapter 1 I like how you equate this descriptive freedom with youth. Quite hard to recapture the feeling. Good haiku. |
| Chidori Nadare 7/5/07 . chapter 1 Somehow it reminds me of a myths. Good job in this haiku. -C.N |
| a silenced revolution 7/4/07 . chapter 1 Beautiful last line. Nice haiku. |
