|Reviews for Youth|
| Ashelin 7/9/07 . chapter 1
I liked how this was in past tense. It gave off the feeling that freedom once was and can never be again. Great haiku.
| Basara 7/8/07 . chapter 1
| Moondog Dozier 7/5/07 . chapter 1
I like how you equate this descriptive freedom with youth. Quite hard to recapture the feeling. Good haiku.
| Chidori Nadare 7/5/07 . chapter 1
Somehow it reminds me of a myths. Good job in this haiku.
| a silenced revolution 7/4/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful last line. Nice haiku.