Reviews for The Girl in the Jumper

Gwen Lyons
2007-07-24
ch 1,

abuseWell well well... You just wrote the plot for a musical. LoL. jk. It is very cute and deep. Wow. I think thats an oxymoron... LoL. Seriously, its great and it made me think of Sandy from Grease. My only criticism would be the first sentence. It didn't rub the right way, if you get my meaning. And that does not warrant a dirty. Its awesome and you deserve a Pulitzer.

Keep up the good work

Gwenhyvar

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