Is quite the excellent piece ye've got here- You somehow manage to draw out and captivate emotions, as if it were actually going on around a body. Quite excellent indeed.

A couple things I thought to mention though- "She didn’t want to get anymore attached that she was." 'that' should probably be 'than', and it would also work a bit better to have 'any more' rather than 'anymore'.

Aww! that's so sweet!

i love your stories!!

They don't give too much background info, but just enough for you to understand the story, and make you wonder and think about all the posibilities!

yay! keep up da fab work!

~RL~