Lovely! One of the few poems with no rhyme scheme that I really enjoyed. I thought it was fabulous how you had a specific structure for each stanza because I believe it made the poem more complete. Very touching! The last line was a little cliche, but I don't really know any other way to put it, so I suppose it kind of had to be there. Anyways, great job with this. Please continue to write with such honest feelings, as it really shows your individuality.

~Wren