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| Fonzie 2008-08-12 ch 10,  | abuseOMG! I LOVE this story. I swear, it is the best story ever! I love it. Noelle and Aiden aw! Update Soon. Please. -FOnzie |
| jayc3218 2008-08-06 ch 13, | abusethe story is awesome please update soon! |
| marikamaroca 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abusekeep up the good work (: |
| COULK 2008-03-25 ch 13, | abuseGrr why diid it end there update soon i beg you to! |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis is supposed to be a review for the last chapter - sorry XD this story s amazing - so sensational - i love the plot but i do wish you wou;ld get the last chapters out already! This is an M fic yeah? well if nothing happens in the next chapter you should turn it into T. Your awesoem -update soon! Ciao Samantha |
| sousie 2008-02-02 ch 13, | abuseawsome update soon |
| StarEyed14 2008-01-19 ch 13, | abuseyou only have a few more chapters left?! YES!! I can't wait for the next chapters then.. lol. now i'll go check your profile and see if you have other stories.hehe |
| StarEyed14 2008-01-19 ch 6, | abusewhy does aiden have to be so mean?!?!? i still like him though. heh |
| StarEyed14 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abusethis is a really good story. i was actually hooked since chapter one, but was too lazy to keep on submitting reviews. hehe. anyways.. i'll just finish reading. |
| mariahxpapaya 2008-01-04 ch 13, | abuseAHH i like this story interesting. [: update pplease?! |
| BeautifulDisaster277 2007-12-26 ch 13, | abuseHey, I totally love this so far! I can't wait until you continue. |
| darkgurl92 2007-12-01 ch 13, | abuseupdate soon...too bad the story is ending..update |
| Angel of Ink 2007-10-07 ch 13, | abuseI like it. I do have a couple suggestions, though. First, you should allow unsigned reviews. You'll get more that way, and feedback is always good. Second, you never, ever, ever write I's. It's my. I's is NOT a word. It's an abortion. I'm being a Nazi, but seriously. Never write I's. Ever. Third, how can Noelle fall in love with Aiden if they never talk? You can't love someone you don't know. I mean, don't get me wrong I really enjoyed reading this, I think it's a great story. But how can she fall for someone she doesn't know a thing about? Even if it's been months, how can she really love him if they never even talk? And... there was one more thing, but I can't remember what it was and anyway, whatever. I've ragged on you enough. =) |
| onegurl 2007-10-01 ch 13, | abuseomg...post soon... |
| phelps112 2007-09-16 ch 13, | abuseaww I like it so far. especially cause it's really got a plot to it, and i feel like i am really getting to know the characters. |