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| Amiot-Lear 2007-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseHm. Portrayal of a Typical American. The title confuses me a bit though. When you say Missing Man, do you mean a man that is atypical of society that therefore is the embodiement of all of us, that we do not want to be reminded of, that is tucked away neatly inside ourselves, hidden? Agh, nevermind. I confused myself. (I give you 8 out of ten) -Amiot |
| Midnight Doorman 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good archetype of a certain type of person in our society. And it combines ideas about such people in a way I haven't heard before. It's a very interesting poem. |
| tearing hands 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! My favorite parts were "to stave off the nightmaress/ of a 7/11 9/11/ all over again" and "time is money/ human rights take time". By the end of the poem I felt like I really knew (and kind of hated) the man you described. |