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| B.S. Ha 2007-07-16 ch 1,  | abuse(this is Painted_Nightmare, by the way) I'm gonna review as I go: -I like the little details that bring the story to life- the ceiling and blanket design, the car's a Toyota, Gina, etc. -Wow, I would've gotten very impatient with typing out the times for the IM convos - How do we know Serendipity was a guy? This is creeping me out, asking for names and not giving them. - Okay, I'm gonna stop reading this, sorry. It looks really interesting, but it's night and I have a real weakness for getting to deep into these type of dark stories. I won't be able to sleep or be alone somewhere for the next month, I'm sure, if I keep reading. But I'm sure the rest of the story is just as good as the beginning. :D ~forest |
| Ravensbleeding 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseWow. The whole time I was like, "OMG!" It shocked me. Every second I was waiting for something to happen, and something did. I thought all the murders were really creative and well thought out. Good job. |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseOh. My god. It was amazing. The whole way through reading this, I was hooked and scared to death. I could barely pull myself away from my computer screen. It was amazingly well written and absolutely sunning. Definitely going on the favorites. -STIX- |