Wow cool story so far, you seem to know a lot about angels and demons. I like how you can explain the story through dialogue and what's happening at that moment between the characters. Usually I have to type out full descriptions, I also think it was cool to throw in the mind reading part as well. I should be able to read more tomorrow when I'm not so tired, haha.

By the way thanks for the review! :)

this is good but i am realy confused... theres like to many people. you need to explain more of the story and the plot. Its a good story but I'm just really confused lol.

-_anna_-

WOw thats so awesome they can still see there friend
yay great chapter please update soon
:-)

aw that's cute
good chapter
please update soon
thanks:-)

wow i wasn't exspecting her to die
crazy
This story is really awesome and the plot which i already said was great is just amazing
I really can't wait to read more
i'm completely hooked
please update as soon as possible:-)

aw he saved her that's so cute i really liked this chapter
i really like this story very creative
please update as soon as possible

the plot is great and your writing is amazing i'm really entranced in the story great job

on to the next chapter