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| Tomiko90 2007-08-22 ch 5,  | abuseI'm sorry I didn't review sooner! Apparently I was wrong about Alan, he's not turning evil like the rest! I can't wait for you to update :) |
| Eric-san 2007-07-29 ch 4, | abuseSome errors, like 'I saw he dig into the chicken hungerly' may throw the reader off. Otherwise, I like it so far! :D |
| Eric-san 2007-07-29 ch 3, | abuseAww... How sweet. This is pretty engaging... Must Keep Reading, Must Not Resist... XD |
| Eric-san 2007-07-29 ch 2, | abuseKind of **-y with the guy licking him and stuff, but it was good writing nonetheless. |
| Eric-san 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseO I like it so far... Suspenseful... |
| Tomiko90 2007-07-09 ch 4, | abuseYaay! You always make me wonder what's going to happen next!! I can't wait for your nexy update :) |
| Tomiko90 2007-07-07 ch 3, | abuseYaay! An update! :D Geez! It seems like Alan is becoming evil!! And then the girl...do I sense romance in the future?! :D Oh! And I put something on my profile about your story! I put up the link too! So hopefully people will see and decide to read your amazing story! They're missing out!! :D Update soon! |
| Tomiko90 2007-07-06 ch 2, | abuseOMG! I want an update!! I can't believe this story has so few reviews!! This is so nicely written! Please, please PLEASE update soon!! :D |
| Tomiko90 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was an amazing beginning to a story! I'm going to read the next chapter now :) |
| crystangel03 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseGood story so far. Loved the way you started the first chapter! :P It seems really interesting and good writing! |