The poem was heartfelt and raw with emotion. I really like the ending of the poem direct and to the point. Sorry I’ve been a little busy with working that this is the only chance I got to write this review. This poem expressed the emotion of being forgotten and as well as of a sense of resolve as to not wanting to repeat the past. All in all it was pretty good and I won’t change a thing about it.

Selverwulf
Member of Reviewers Kingdom

First of all - sounds like that man is a complete and utter nob. Second of all, I love the flow, its segmented in exactly the right places to make me want to keep reading. Nice style, nice language - hope you bunted his ** when he came back.

really good - simple but powerfull!

Well, I agree with one of your reviews that I could hear your voice. Not in the sense of knowing your voice, but that it apparently came from you.

The words you put were direct and even, explaining what you went and slightly what you felt.

It was nice. In honesty the thing I liked most was how I could imagine your voice.

~Mosaic

I can hear your voice and emotion when I read this poem. I hope everything works out.

I really like the feel of this poem. I can tell a lot of personal experience went into writing this, and it's not confusingly vague and not mind-numbingly boring with too many details. Nice work, keep writing!