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| TheLivingDead123 2007-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery well written. I read some of your other poems too. They all seem to have song-like features about them. This one was one of my favorites. Very subtle and good word choice! |
| FreakierThanThou 2007-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseNice. I like how it's called a pillow, and never really defined much about the cloud. You don't go on and on about what it looks like, you just describe how it seems when you're looking up on it. It's hard to explain why I like it, I just do. Good job. Keep writing, -Freaky |
| Luma 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. It was short but it said so very much. The best poems are sometimes the short ones. This was great! And thank you, thank you for your review! Quite amazing of you to look up the translation :) keep writing, L. |
| Duck Tape Girl 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abusei really like this one! nice job. |