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| DBro 2007-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow, oh wow. I'm so glad I decided to look through your work, because this one really hits the mark. I absolutely love the last five lines, especially the last two. Excellent work!! |
| ThePoetMan 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseAuthor = TOTALLY FAVORITED |
| Skeleton jar 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, trust me, you think you wouldn't have minded. but you would (coming from someone who let the same mistake happen over and over again) I liked this a lot. |
| Wear Me 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusetruth hurts, so does love (doesnt make this any less beautiful )the last two lines are amazing Just to breathe you in for a moment… Would have kept me breathing for a lifetime. |
| Josh Fogdall 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is very powerful. You did an amazing job describing all the emotion that can embrace the soul when it is in such pain. The last two lines in this really hit home for me. Great job! |
| concerto49 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHeya. Concerto. Everything is both ways. Love can be sweet and yet painful. I guess that's life. Nothing is ever straightfoward, simple, or pure. There's always mixes and things like that happen. Perhaps it just depends on timing. This is graphical and ooh cool. Hm, perhaps there'll be better experiences later on. Live on for yourself. There's always something else to look forward to. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| maximusrexmundi 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, I definately know what you are talking about, and I have felt the same way. It hurts, and this poem pretty much sums that all up. |
| Rob Macabre 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI really rather like this work. And I have felt like this before. |