 animegirl214 2009-10-19 . chapter 1aw :)
so he's the fiance right? and he forgets things?.. like who his own fiance is? :P
thanks for the awesome oneshot! :) :) |
 Pione 2009-10-08 . chapter 1Good read! Very unexpected. |
 catd94 2009-09-22 . chapter 1 I loved the plot. It was very original(: |
 annoyance 2009-07-19 . chapter 1It's beautiful.
~Annoyance |
 anonymous 2009-07-02 . chapter 1 that was really really beautiful (i NEVER comment on stories either, i think this is the first time). this is really impressive writing for this website as well. i went back and reread several times. it was beautiful in its simplicity, that kind of sadness that makes your chest ache a little. really beautiful work, more like a piece of art. |
 Boo 2009-06-12 . chapter 1 wow...so romantic and unique! loved it! |
 Heather Feather 2009-05-18 . chapter 1How pretty. Simple yet effective. |
 Emmy131 2009-03-17 . chapter 1That was fantastic! I realized it about halfway through and immediately went back up to reread. Great job! |
 Elle Winters 9 2009-02-07 . chapter 1And here I thought that he would still be puzzled at the end. It was simple yet effective. I really liked it. |
 zagato 2009-01-27 . chapter 1Thanks for writing! This story is so cool. Please write more. |
 bittersweet priestess 2008-12-26 . chapter 1I loved it~! Bittersweet yet it still had a happy ending. :) |
 xoxo 2008-10-22 . chapter 1 cool plot! awesome job ;) |
 Anne 2008-08-14 . chapter 1 Just wanted to tell you that a writer on fanfiction . net plagiarized this one shot. Her profile URL is w(.)fanfiction(.)net/~Cenababe1 |
 righthere431 2008-07-07 . chapter 1=] i knew that he was the fiance =] really unique plot and loved the story |
 Teva'ni-Britagne 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Wow this was so sad and yet so sweet, the ending was rather predictable though since a few lines of their conversation sort of gave it away. The hibiscus flower scent was also a key identifier in the mystery woman's appearance. Lovely imagery and I love how he remembered halfway through--the whole atmosphere of the story and even the setting was realistic.
LMQ |