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OrangeRose143 2009-08-23 . chapter 20
No it's over! I love this story so much. I was scared at the abusising parts. My friend told me when she moved to my neighbor hood that she was abused when she was a girl, so everytime I read that it would remind me of her. And Jayden is my favorite character.
P.S. I've been kissed like that :O ;)
Bam-There You Go 2009-05-27 . chapter 20
i really loved this story and the previous one, minus the super long songs and flashbacks, maybe. otherwise it was awesome. my favorite person in the story has got to be liam. im glad he had a close friend like logan. :D
mistress tee 2008-09-25 . chapter 20
ok so... after this story...(Behind my heart) which one do I read next? There are a few with the same names (except for Liams... that one seems to be different) so I'm a little confused.
Fleeting Moment 2007-10-28 . chapter 20
I'm gonna cry! THAT WAS THE BEST!
writing.life.2.4 2007-10-27 . chapter 20
aw! its like sad and happy at the same time! I luv it so much, its a great way to end it. tho i am a little disappointed a tiny bit but that's just me. i guess i would've liked to see them maybe 10-15 yrs later. but i know you guys have done that b4 and so this was really good too. i'm glad liam finally got a friend his age and that Rhuben met ethan, he's so nice! (even tho its only a story... if it wasn't-) I would so hope that rhuben and jaydens relationship worked out in the long run. great job and congrats on finishing the trilogy (it was a trilogy rite?)! AWESOME WORK
Undrahas 2007-10-24 . chapter 20
*Cries really hard* Oh my gosh! I've never read a story thats making me cry this much before! I can't believe they moved to Florida then to Australia! I'm still cryying with tear stained cheecks, and a stuffy nose! The ending was terrific! I can't believe it...This is one of them endings I can use my imaganation on! I hate and love those, but thins one I love because I'm choosing to believe that Rhuben and Jayden found away to stay toghter! Weather it be trip to Australia, or trips to California I know they found a way to stay toghter.

I'm really happy that Rhuben and Liam are happy. I may hate them being away from their friends, but theres nothing I can do becuase I'm not the author! If anything I would recomend you send the stories about Rhuben and all to a publisher just to see if there intrested. Well, I'll end thi incredibly long review. I'm sorry I just had so much to say! Theres alot of good things that can be said about this story...I would recomend a publishier, and if it gets publihied i would recomend it to all of my friends becuase it is so good. Well, I'll review new stories that you write. See ya later! Again sorry for the long review, but theres just so much good things to be said. Sorry again.
-Undrahas
P.S. Wow! A long review with only two paragraphs!
writing.life.2.4 2007-10-20 . chapter 17
aw! thats so cute! i luv the ending with the kid and the gun, thats so great. and liam is so cute sometimes. i'm so glad everything ended well! yay! (well idk how u could kill off the main characters rite?) still wondering about how much there is left. is this the end? luv it as always!
writing.life.2.4 2007-10-19 . chapter 16
yay! finally a update! yay! it makes me happy! i'm so glad they finally got found and the last line is so cute. aw i luv all of ur characters! i really do? how much more to the story is there? jw. great job!
Undrahas 2007-10-18 . chapter 16
Reunited at last. After a month or so of searching, they finally found them!! Thank you flower lady!

This wa a great chapter, and reunion between them all!
-Undrahas
Undrahas 2007-09-23 . chapter 15
that was an awesome chapter!! NOI DON'TY WANT THE TORY TO END!
writing.life.2.4 2007-09-22 . chapter 15
ha! the highschool musical song EVERYDAY OF OUR LIVES! i luv that song! i can't wait for the next chapter to come out but i understand the school thing, i haven't been able to do almost any work since school started, teachers dont think we have lives rite? this chapter was really good. my only thing is try giving credit to the songs at the beginning just incase someone doesnt know it. other wise REALLY good!
Fleeting Moment 2007-09-22 . chapter 15
That was soo good! UPDATE!
writing.life.2.4 2007-09-08 . chapter 14
omg, that's so mean. i can't wait for the next chapter. they have to be saved. they really do. and if either one of them dies that'd be like.. horrible! can't wait, good chapter. wats the song/poem thing in this chap?
Undrahas 2007-09-04 . chapter 14
oh no. i'm not likeing this at all...
Fleeting Moment 2007-09-04 . chapter 14
A, THAT WAS SO MEAN TO STOP HERE! UPDATE!
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