very good. i think that it was an original plot. i think maybe it should have had more background on the girl. like how she changed. what she did EXACTLY. i don't know. it always helps set the scene for me.

very good.
later.

brilliant

I like this. It's positive, as compared to the angst that floats around here. I like the picture you painted about a girl, who's tired to be someone whom she's not, and finding that out, in the oddest situations and time. Good job. I definitely enjoyed reading it.