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rubberduckysabc 2008-08-16 . chapter 10
i like the paring riley and aiden they seem cute together and they look like the perfect cupple
hail the heartbreakers 2008-06-26 . chapter 8
This is a really good story and I think that Riley is definetly the best character with bipolar disorder that I have ever read. All of the others are the stereotyped mood swings and depression. And I can really connect with her because I am in almst the same situation minus the abusive father and ex best friend's boy friend thing.
Fleeting Moment 2007-08-17 . chapter 9
I'm sorry but I cna't realy pick a favorite... THAT WAS AWSOME!
A Frozen Flame 2007-08-17 . chapter 9
Ok, so i submitted this really long and awesome review, and then right before i sent it my signal died and it erased it. >:O

so heres basically what i said.

NICE CHAPTER

pairings.

rhuben and cage

Riley and Lucas
Iloveyou.FromCourtney 2007-08-17 . chapter 9
Great Story!

As for the pairings...
For Riley, I'd say RileyxCage because they have sort of a love/hate relationship. They know they like each other, but they don't admit it and that's fun to read about. And for Rhuben, I'd say RhubenxJayden because Rhuben likes his smile and personality and it's obvious he likes her back.

That's all i got to say for now. again, great story.
-Court
Undrahas 2007-08-17 . chapter 9
This was an awesome story! please make a sequel!

The parings:

Rhuben and Jayden because they've known each other forever, and he's caring. They make a really good couple because with the help of each other they can get thourgh anything no one else might not be able to help him with, and Jaydens father need a chance to get to know Rhuben. She's a good girl, and its almost like they complete each other.

For Riley I can't choose one, but if I really had to I'd go for Riley and Brady. The reason why is because they also seem to complete eachother. They can help eachother thourgh anything, and they truly seem to in love. Love starts out as best friends, then if there willing it escalates to relationship, and from there nature plays its roll.

Don't get me wrong I like Riley and Cage, and Riley and Aiden, though between the two Riley and Aiden more, but Riley and Brady make a better couple than these two.

OK well hope you make another one to this one!

-Undrahas
Undrahas 2007-08-16 . chapter 8
why is it that you always seem to put the lyrics in the right place, and also pick the right song for every song chapter you do? I mean come on What I've Done is perfect for this chapter, and the lyrics fit perfectly! espically at the end, though Riley has nothingto forgive herself for. she did nothing. Eric tried to rape her, so he should of been oh i don 't maybe killed, or dumped, or maybe raped himself i don't know. something to make him pay. wait a minutwe are dawn and Eric still toghter, because if they are i wanna kill eric and dawn. eric you can guess, but dawn for not believing her bet friend over a boy! a boy for Gods sake! i'd believe my best friend, only because i don't really trust guys but i do believe in love again, and my best friend would proably believe me!

ok sorry got really mad. this was really good.
Katy Kitty 2007-08-16 . chapter 8
It's been a while since I've reviewed... but one thing hasnt changed...

AND THATS THE AWESOMENESS OF THIS STORY!

I really realy really really like it!

More more more!
Fleeting Moment 2007-08-15 . chapter 8
AW, he is so perfect! UPDATE
!1
sweets555 2007-08-15 . chapter 8
brady is adorable. great chapter, very well written!
A Frozen Flame 2007-08-15 . chapter 8
Wow, that was a really interesting chapter, and the end with Brady and Riley was really cute too, nice to read. so good job on the chapter! I really want to read the next one now!

Though i don't really understand why Riley just didn't knock Dawn's lights out, heck, i might have even.
Onia Black 2007-08-15 . chapter 8
aweeh
sweet =]
poor riley though
have you noticed that you use the same names a lot?
it sort of bugs me.
aiurwaves. 2007-08-15 . chapter 8
dawns a bitch.

good chapter

update soon.

~miss deelylah rose
Fleeting Moment 2007-08-12 . chapter 7
This is realy good! UPDATE! (please update behind my heart!)
A Frozen Flame 2007-08-10 . chapter 7
Hey, I liked this chapter.

Sorry I don't reveiw your stories as much as i used to. It's just that i don't read the ones about abuse. sorry, just the way i am.

but i liked this one! good job!
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