wow. i am simply amazed. you have a very nice writing style, very emotive. i can totally feel the mood of the story, and nice dark shadowed scenes play out in my head as i read your words.
i love the drips. they set the reader's pace, thus setting the mood.
i also like how the actual events leading up to the end is vaguely 'suggested', and not mentioned outright, leaving the reader in the dark for the most part.
i have only a few criticisms:
i'm not very fond of the ending. i would have preferred it it ended more abruptly, like with a drip.
i got confused quite a number of times with the sometimes strange grammar, and usage of 'bliss' as an adjective. but i can overlook some of that.

overall, very nice. fave.