konban wa

I definitely liked this one better than the first I read. I especially liked how you rhymed in the chorus: the first and second line and then the parenthesis word ("forever") on the second line and the third line. It was really cool, for want and lack of a better word. ;P

This was really heart-trending and touching.

Zaijen

-Shan-

Cute song. I myself cannot relate to this, but I'm sure lots of others can. Good work.

Arafax