Really. Only two chapters? Please put the rest up for newbies like me. If you have more than 600 reviewers you must really be a good writer, so please update!

Great! I'd almost forgotten about this, but I was pleasantly surprised when I saw the alert for it in my mail box today. I can't wait to read what you've got!

omg i lalalalove how you used my name in it, Alice :) no one has my name -_-

Okay, this is so not complete - why does it say it categorized as 'complete'? lol Great two chapters, which is why I'm a little iffed that there's no more to read. I'm a TOTAL sucker for the teacher-student flings, so I would LOVE this story if you completed it. I'm guessing you're not updating since you last updated two years ago... :(

cool story :) somehow...i feel it's still incomplete? unless you've given it up? which is a shame cos it's really well-written and seems interesting!

WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DELETING THIS STORY?

I WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF READING IT!

I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE IT SO FAR!

PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!

And they continue to freakin fall. This is getting ridiculous.

Yup. The tears are still falling.

I'm still crying.

Seriously? I cried through the whole chapter and I'm still crying now.

What the hell?

I really hoped that there really is a sequel to this story! because its simply amazing! and btw the 'darkness' to the story makes it seem more realistic :) x

Poor Dan! He's trying so hard to feep focused and not loose control so that he can help everyone else! It would be extremely difficult to do that! especially after his loss!:(

OH NO! the chapters just keep getting even more powerful! I CRIED AGAIN! :'( very amazing writing! ;)

I CAN'T BELIEVE I ACTUALLY CRIED! You are an amazing writer by the way!I really loved Ryan's character in this version :D What an amazingly sweet guy! hehe :)