so his mother is/might be the murdrrer

this story is f**king awesome! I'm in love with it. Update again soon! I hope Bekah gets back to Dan soon.

It did have a very melancholy feel to it; Dan's part anyway. I love that they were dreaming the same dream at the beginning. It WAS the same, right? I might have misread it, but i'm pretty sure it was the same.

So, now Nadine is considered guilty, at least in Dan's eyes, even if he doesn't admit it. Dan's a smart guy. Which is why he'll figure out exactly what to do next. I suppose he just did? That would explain his sudden rush to exit the room.

I'm so excited about the next chapter. I can't wait to see where it goes. My email received a message saying you'd posted 72, but it's not up now. You took it down i assume, or it was just a note. In any case, i'm looking to more!

Marie

I don't think you should chage it,i've read the whole thing 2 times over and love should just keep going on with this story line its so interesting!Question thorough...Nadine said the bullet wasn't meant for ryan,so does that mean she tried to kill Rose(so nothing would happen)?

Where is he going? Does he have an idea? Or does he just have something to say to someone?

As for Nadine being a conspirator...well, I can't imagine having an attempt made on somebody's life, but for it to go wrong and kill my own kid...that would be devastating, and I can't even imagine how guilty she must feel. I kind of feel badly for her...kind of. It's a rather sad life she leads, but she mostly brought it on herself. I wonder if Ryan's suggestion about personal experience is right...and if so, I'm curious to know what the personal experience would be. Her history is intriguing me now.

And Dan's perspective was definitely melancholic.

Botched the story? What? You have to leave this up. Actually, I could see this ending in totally different ways, but only because of different courses of actions leading to the end. Im sure everyone would want this to have a happy ending for Rebekah and Dan, but that can be done through so many ways.

You are doing a really good job of incorporating flashbacks and thinking into your story...I have read some that do not do it very well...Over all I find your story well written and I love the fact that you use proper grammer...Keep up the good work...you may want to consider getting this published sometime

very, very good. i liked howit was written. it flowed.

and it's very interesting!

:D

WOW! 70 chapters! How cool! Congrats!

These two chapters were a really good read. I especially loved the flashbacks. I'm a big fan of those in general. They offer so much to stories if done right and have the right content. Yours are perfect, of course.

I had a funny thought while reading chapter 70 though. I don't know where it came from, and you'll probably think i'm crazy. It was when Dan was thinking about Bekah and pink. He thinks that she is "mature for her age, but ... [soft]." So i read this line and i was like, 'Bekah is like a marshmallow!' Yeah, crazy i know, but listen. She's mature enough to stand up for herself, act tough and know what she wants (she holds her shape in marshmallow land) but is still soft on the inside ... Ok. Tell me i've lost my mind. I did NOT just compare one of your characters to squidgy sugar. I imagine Dan would be most displeased. LoL.

Ok! I think it's definitely time to go to bed. Between the extra studying, and the cold i have, i'm losing it. Have a good rest, and update ASAP!

Marie

yay! Dan smart!

WOW. This is a long one... but I am amazed by how much detail you're able to put in and all the stuff about Nadine is great! Even though you said that you were hinting at this I didn't see it at all but now Nadine's depression after Ryan's death seems to have more meaning... GREAT chapter as usual.

I can't help but fell I've read this thing before. I hope you posted it, please tell me you did, I hate plagarism. Great story though, love the romance. Watch for my new romance story, I'll have it up soon.

Fave.

I wonder if Oliver has any idea what his wife is up to, or if he's totally oblivious. And if so, will he figure it out? Will he tell Dan? Will Dan figure it out for himself? Will he go home?

There are just too many questions. And Bekah's worry that the assassin had been after her but for some reason missed seems likely...though I don't know if it'll be that "easy" an explanation. Well, I'm very curious to know all of Nadine's motives and everything else that makes her tick.

oh i will enjoy them

oh...this is crazy! in a good way. can't wait to see what's going on...:D