Wow. This was cool. Dan must be going crazy! I wish Bekah had said she loved him too now. Which reminds me about your PM. It's not that i don't think Bekah loved Ryan. I'm sure she did, very much, but i've always been a Dan fan-girl. I'm just impatient with Bekah. It seems to me, that every time she feels something for Dan, she deliberately reminds herself about Ryan so she doesn't have to admit to anything. I'm sure it's just the guilt though. Having never been in this situation, i can't really sympathise. ANYWAY! This was a great chapter! I can't wait for more!

Marie

fewkujasdrhgliareg WOWOWOWOWOWOW. I love this story. I'm pretty sure I've said it before but this is like amazing! And aw... he loves her. Thats adorable. Update really realy soon as usual. And the chapter before this wasn't that awkward like you said it was...

oh my gosh! i definitely did not see that coming. i dont even know what to say. im speechless! very good chapter though...im just shocked and panicing...wheres bekah!

wa...poor dan. T_T he always has to go through so much! (and rose...but her POV isn't in this chappy, lol XD) anyways...u did a great job on conveying Dan's feelings and thoughts...plz update asap!

aw...i can feel his struggle. poor thing! i hope rebekah and the baby are safe! you describe the feelings and situations very well!

GAH your cunfusing...or mybe it's bicose of your story ...no not story , your review for us lol i don't even know the hints xD

omg please update asap i have my finals and i cant get enouggh agh

... ok, what just happened? Why is there a gun? This is not how things are supposed to be! This was completely out of left field. I can't believe you kept something like this from me! ... Ok, honestly, it's pretty exciting, but she should have told Dan that she loves him. She's just using the Ryan excuse now because she doesn't want to admit it, and it's getting REALLY irritating. I can't get over the gun thing. This is so cool! But i can't believe overprotective, paranoid Dan would leave her alone in a hotel room surrounded by strangers. Surely he saw the guy out in the hallway when he left the room? Hm. I'll have to think about these developments.

Great song too btw. I love it, and the movie. I cry every single time, but it's too good to miss. BUT! You update REALLY soon now! You can't leave us hanging after that ending!

Marie

OMG! wa...how? i seriously reread the chapter and still didn't pick up on anything...ga! plz plz please update soon! im making that popcorn now, lol. but oh my gosh...i really didn't see that coming at all o_O O_o

please update as soon as earthly possible!

Okay, So I have been reading this story for weeks, because I read it while I am at work because my home life is too busy lol. But I love how you keep it updated and dont wait months upon months to submit a new chapter. But anyways I have been wanting to review this story for some time and I am sorry that I am now just getting to it. I absolutely love this whole story set up. In the beginning I could feel the emotion and I myself started to well up inside and just feel the loss of Ryan. I love that Dan and Rose got together because you are right. Who better to take care of her and her child? I am in total suspense on who took Ryans life and is out to get them. I love how you combined drama and romance in one story. It is just a great story and I thought I would make it aware to you that you are a fantastic writer. You are unique and just have a talent that I have only seen in few people. I can not wait to get further into this story. Oh and I might add that I love how you make the chapters lengthy because when I read a chapter I dont want it to end and if it is longer than what average writers put, I love that cause it adds more suspense. You are just awesome:)

O_O SHIT! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Phantom'sLuv

um wow...u said u dropped hints...and i was kinda expecting some action soon..but wow that came out of no where

it's oliver's people, isn't it?

You keep doing that. Just when I finally get the chance to catch up again, you end with this horrible cliffhanger. It's terrible.

oh! the suspense! i wonder who's at the door! and if her father is the killer! i love this story, by the way1 you are doing a great job. i'm hooked.