Ok, hey!

I just wanted to let you know, before I moved on to another fantastic and heart wrenching stories of yours, that the 'Young Teacher' rocked. It was a great story all the way through, even though it had it's rough patches, hey everything does right? I loved it. :D And I think you should consider publishing if you haven't already. It really was read like a book, and I find that very rare around her on fiction press. And the characters were absolutely defined, with smooth-witty remarks and god, somtimes you know I had to laugh. ;)

So let me get off here and move on to my boring life! :D

Right on!

Augusta.

Alright, so I was wrong! But Whoa, I didn't expect that.

haha, I love Dan! He's so protective.

Is it bad that I don't think Bekah actually had a miscarriage? That it's just a sick joke Oliver is playing?

Anyways, this story is quite amazing. I had my doubts when I read the miscarriage chapter, but than came up with that conclusion.

I miss Ryan though, he was such a nice character! Even though I do love Dan/Bekah, Ryan/Bekah was really sweet too.

Eh! I just on chapter fifteen, and I want to let you know as much as you've probably heard from the other computer-swamped freaks on here, this story is really good. :D I love it, and I'll probably stay up all night finishing it. Soo... wait for my upcoming review. Cause I totally have more!

Ahh I love how Dan doesn't really want her to know, and yet he's dying to tell her. Its great.

i like your story pls finish the sequel:P to

this is one of the stories that make searching for an hour worth it. nice job

the only objection I have is that there's a lot of concern about the characters being Christian. i understand religion is important when forming long-term relationships or marriage, but it's hardly a prerequisite for friendship or even dating.

really good [:

Whooa, I would've definitely slept with Dan..but Ryan? Ryan? Honestly? He acts like a twelve year old XD (older men are hot!)

Lol I was going to comment on the cheerleader thing, because I'm FAR from an airhead, but I read your disclaimer on chapter 11 and decided not to attack you (though I do have a weighted gpa higher than a 4.0 and am in the National Honor Society...side note being I'm a varsity cheerleader, and I'm interviewing with Princeton on Sunday) I really do love this story! (sorry for emphasizing my background, just wanted anyone who reads this to know that cheerleaders aren't necessarily airheads). I think anytime an author uses a stereotype, they take a risk offending people, but it did work for your story since the protagonist has a view of cheerleaders that fits her personality and outlook on life. Anyway, I love it so far! I'm going to continue reading now :D

hm cant wait till the sequel

Okay, this is definitely interesting and I will read the sequel to see what happens. I do wonder, though, if you'll tell me how you were originally going to end it, since it has changed so much since then.

Thanks.

Hmm, well i hadnt expected this ending. *shrug* But it was good none the less. Great job :] Looking forward to the sequel!

Phantom'sLuv

hmm...well it's interesting i'll give you that. i'm off to read the sequel now. cya later Alenor.

well i have no idea where this is going to end up and idk if that is good or bad...

That selfish unprintable name! UGH! WHY does he ALWAYS have to have a catch! Though we did get fair warning that that was his personality, but still -whines- lol.