So, would Oliver expect to have a parental role in Ryan/Rose's child's life? Would he treat Rose like a surrogate or will she and Dan be the parents and Oliver just the grandparent? Ugh! This is frustrating! Will the sequel start the story over or will it begin where this story left off?

Wow. I have no clue what's gonna happen. Did she not miscarry after all? Or is Ryan mysteriously alive? Plz, plz, plz update again soon!

Ooh I'm intrigued to say the least!

It was twins, and they didnt tell her! That, or they collected Ryans sperm and have it frozen somewhere. Anyway, very interesting.

YAY! I really like what you have planned. lol I'm excited.

Sadly though I deleted your email after my reaction, I didn't do it on purpose I was just cleaning out my box and since I'd already clicked on it I thought I had read it, but I hadn't.

Great chapter! Don't worry, I'm not giving up on it, I've just been on holidays. I'm really looking forward to Oliver's surprise!

Wow. So sad. I don't think Bekah is Mary Sue-ish at all. And Dan's behavior seemed reasonable.

But I'm a little confused; Do they know for sure that Ted raped Kaye, or is that just something Dan assumes?

Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one!

You canNOT tell me you're thinking of giving this up. Please, don't tell me that. If you do, i'll get mad! ... LoL. That sounded so childish. The kind of thing a kid says right before they stick their tongue out at you. LoL.

Ok seriously, I hope you don't decide to abandon this, coz i really loved this chapter, and didn't think it was melodramatic or anything. I felt a whole HEAP of emotions, and tears pricked my eyes at the end. Kaye really frustrated me, until she said that Dan would make a great son-in-law. Bekah annoyed me too, until she broke down. What really gets me about Bekah though, and i've said this before i think, is how much she reminds me of myself. It's seriously scary. I can get like that too on bad days, particularly with my dad. The difference is that i don't end up crying. *shrugs* But what can you do, right?

Anyway, there was an alert in my inbox for another update, but it's gone now. I assume it was an Author's Note of some sort. I didn't get to see it coz it arrived in my inbox at 2am, and i didn't get to the computer til noon. What was it about? Anything i should worry about?

Let me know what's going on with this story, but i really hope you'll still consider updating. All hope is not lost after all! Of course, i can say it, coz i know what's going on but ... OK. i'm rambling now. I'll stop. Just PM me or something please. Thanks!

Marie

Well I like the depressing factor of it and although where Ryan was alive (have you made one where Ryan actually survives the attack yet? Or maybe in a coma and Dan and her get close but he wakes up, ah no!) it was great to see the competition with him and Dan, I like how Dan is trying to get her to pull through all this heartache even though I don't think he's dealing with his own heartache yet.

In other words, I love all these versions you're making, although maybe in this version them two actually getting together would be better off in a sequel as a sort of fresh start? Although I like more anger in a story, as that's just me but I think it makes for better writing and reading!

You should think about getting these stories published or something, they're all so good and individual!

Noo dont bring Ryan back, that'd be WAY too complicated. This is depressing, but good just the way it is

Phantom'sLuv

I like the first version you had... ryan still died, but I just liked what happened afterward.

I don't like how Rebekah has been acting these last few chapters (okay, maybe b/c i'm such a romantic) toward Dan... I wish the baby had lived and she didn't have a miscarrage. It's like everything's been piled up on Rebekah (Ryan's death, having to stay at a place other than home, stressing out about her dad) and and I think that the baby was the one thing that really pulled through that everything wasn't so bad. It was also beautiful because even though Ryan HAD died, a part of him was still alive...

i don't know, that's just my personal opinion. You're a very talented writer and i know you said that things were going to get brighter, so I'll still keep reading no matter what you do.

awsome chapter

so are they going to move from there

I'm not giving up!

are u trying to make oliver more human