ohh i like the last line!

Yeah, actually that line struck me too. I always think about that, and I really don't want to be remembered when I die. But, that's all up to the person I supose. Anyway, it's amazing, like your other works.

konnichi wa

I loved the line: "When you fight to be forgotten" It just struck me, I guess, because people are always trying to be remembered after they die. You know - what can I do so that people won't forget me after I'm no longer living? That sort of thing. But this was beautiful, absolutely amazing. I loved it.

Zaijen
-Shan-

P.S: Have a great weekend.