i liked how you told this like a story, almost as if you were talking to the reader : ]

A new one. Sad, really. It's all like, "betrayal!" and, "die, punctuation, die!"

Based on a true story, love? Is there no hope for a repeat performance of, say, chapter one for one Lacie? If so, I'm so sorry. If not, what inspired this poem? Just a nice way to end, I suppose ...

Anywho, it was a great collection. My heart wasn't into it because 1) it's very early and 2) I've already read most of these poems. But I like it! Especially chapter 2 ... it's like heaven on paper. *hugs*

Love,
Felicia.

Angry, indeed.

By the way, I like the titles you put to these. Not that there was anything wrong with the originals. For the point and purpose of this, they're excellente.

Felicia.

I love how it's all put together, but ... I'll admit that it's irritating to have already read these. Not that they're bad, they're just not new. Well.

My previous opinions on these still stand. *shrugs* I've nothing new to say, really.

Felicia.

Ok. I KNOW I've read this one before. AND favorited it. For a reason. I still love this poem. Nothing's changed on my part.

So familiar. A repost of this one, right?

Well, it's nice. Very mushy. I'm not so much for mushy, but this serves a purpose being mushy (it wouldn't be right otherwise), so I'm cool with it. Yay.

The last two stanzas are nice, as is the third-to-last.

Felicia.

Oh wow. This compiliation really worked great together. Emotion really makes itself known in your writing.