It's so good to see writers who write about the real issues and problems in life! I really love your song! Keep writing!

Sammy B.

i love it =]

write more please =]


srz

Yay! I love song lyrics...and this is no exception.

This song makes me want to scrawl the lyrics on my wall. (If I can find any room. haha)

Love

The Toothpaste Fiend

I really liked this. Movement is easy to feel in this and it is easily heard! VERY GOOD!

=) Kay

Wow, really great. My favourite line is the "behind this smile is a frown" I'm not sure why, but I just love it, it's simple adn yet so deep. I don't make any sense...

Anywhos... keep up the good work, and again, thanks for the review.

Ripley

this is not your first poem/song idiot !! and i'm glad you put the / in between the two words cuz u know very well that poemsong is MY word!! mwahaha!! lol anyhow. you played out the theme of the song wonderfully, but i have to say it's messy. i can't tell what's the chorus and what's not, you should seperate the verses, like 'verse 1' and 'verse 2'...etc. (btw, isn't 'save me from this hell' taken from animal i have become by three days grace...? T T. yeah. i think it slipped out of your mind subconsciously since your recent obssession with the band...o.O) but great work overall. just format it and it's a good song. a bit short..tho

Wow. I adored this! You should record it XD . It's very challenging to write songs that have good flow, I know, but you've done a lovely job.

I have but one piece of advice: perhaps you should set it out a bit clearer? Double-space between verses, I mean.

Other than that, this is beautiful. Lovely work.

xx