Frankly, I think this qualifies far more as hate mail than anything you're likely to get. But heh, I don't know what you've gotten, so...

In any case. Listen, I honestly don't see why you would post this online. I know this is going to sound like some sort of marketing statement (oh God) but NOBODY really wants to read something like this. It's just annoying; both the content matter, and the way it's written. I can't see this being a song at all, since I've found neither rhyme nor rhythm in it. MAYBE death metal or something. I have a pretty damn low opinion of death metal though.

Also, the capitalization and exclamation points are just extraneous. NO ONE needs this many (!) exclamation points in one line. The point is made with one, max two. It is more than made when the line is typed in all caps.

But although as a song I think it is significantly lacking, though I fail to see why anyone would want to listen to (or read the transcript of) someone screaming abuse at one of their friends, though the superfluous exclamation points and caps lock annoys me, I have to give you a solitary point, and thus credit, for knowing the real definition of "**."

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Hee hee, I think it's time for s o m e b o d y to take a little nappie.