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| smile for the sunshine 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseWell the little something that doesn't mean anything is pretty cool to me. I liked it. It was very creative...A little angsty but good. I've written angsty stuff too. So yeah. It's good. |
| xfail 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was surprisingly good. I have found that poetry in this category has the potential to be very cliché and corny, this was not. The line 'warm and red and beautiful' seemed to disrupt the flow slightly, but otherwise, it had a good rythym. Well done. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the ending the whole poem has a sinister feel to it but the ending is especially good, well done. |