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GinzzzRoxxx 2008-07-13 ch 4,	abusei like it. theres some originality for yah.
CarlyJo 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseOMG! :tackles and hugs: You're back! It wasn't bad, short, but you know it's hard to get back into the swing of things. I was looking for inspiation, and here is your story, updated! YAY! Okay, sorry, hyper. welcome back!! :hugs: ~Carly =:3 )
quwira 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseomg hurray! i freaking love u! and tis 4 me! tis the ultimate joy
Jessiy Landroz 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseBOOYA! XD you updated! I was just staring at this story a few days ago and wondering if I ought to poke you for an update! 8D; glad you already updated~ X3 As for this chapter; short and sad but still links back to the original story I remember from long ago, but now that Jess has no way of reaching Damon, how would she get to the Jewel Lands again for the rest of the story to carry out its flow? Other than that, I finally figured out your langauge! Now I'm just worried who this 'black godi' (?) is suppoused to be; "Something wicked this way comes." perhaps? D: And take your time with the updates~ I know it can be frustrating when you want to get to the next chapter, but have a roadblock preventing you from advancing, it's every authors challenge, so kick it's butt with a boot of steal, it hurts more! ;)
the best cuz in the world 2007-07-26 ch 3, anon.	abuseman thias just keeps getting better and better! tell me when u put the next chappy on k. or ill get u! oh and wats with dingo boy?
quwira 2007-07-16 ch 3,	abusehell yeah im on the awesome list! i LURVED this chappie! i hope u had a great time in queensland, even if ur dad is a pain in the arse.
CarlyJo 2007-07-14 ch 3,	abuseGreat job! UPDATE SOON! (I think that was the shortest review I've ever left you.)
VesperK 2007-07-14 ch 3,	abuseThis looks like a fun story so far. ...:D
AT da 1 who nva reviews 2007-07-14 ch 2, anon.	abusei like this alot better than the original coz its at a slower pace and there more detail
Jessiy Landroz 2007-07-14 ch 3,	abuseAh, I can see you changed your approch of how to get Jess to your Jewel lands, eh? As suspenceful as it is, I worry to think how you're going to keep the same story line now that you're introduced a new character (or was he?) so early in the remake. I noticed two bunched paragraphs that had me confused for a moment, but I guess you forgot to space them before posting; no biggie~ Also, I found it odd you kept calling Sax 'Dingo-boy' in the narrative, especially since we sort of figured out you were talking about the dog, but then again it might just be me. Then when in the forest they were ambushed by the lady and Sax/Damon stransformed into a 'dingo'... if Sax's dingo-form is also his dog form, then Jess shouldn't be scared, should she? Shocked maybe, but not scared... or did I get that part wrong?
Angelthunder 2007-07-14 ch 3, anon.	abuselook here look here not over there! over here OMG IM REVEWING! wow wat a turn in events ey? well im reviwing now haha and i think its good ur last one before you redid it was a bit fast paced as in u were going to fast ya get it? so yea i like it and u know that already so... . . . .. . . . . . . .hehe dots
griffensgrace 2007-07-08 ch 2,	abuseI am reviewing. There. Done. AND I LIKE SAX! he's the whole reason why I started reading this story. ^_^
emmmmmmmmmmma 2007-07-08 ch 1, anon.	abusecool man. i donjt no wat its al; about but its alot better then some i've read
CarlyJo 2007-07-07 ch 2,	abuseShe knows! I love the redone verson! i can't wait to read more. UPDATE SOON! (I know. I should listen to myself.)
CarlyJo 2007-07-07 ch 1,	abuseI have to start paying attention! I didn't know you were restarting! Awesome job on this. It had great detail. i'm off to read the next one.

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