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| Kneeling Glory 2007-12-02 ch 1,  | abuseYou caught my attention with "she twists her dreams around her wrists/and cries soft-spoken memories" Those lines are stunningly gorgeous. Great write. |
| Pesadilla Mortal 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. Could there be any other word to describe this? Of course; a multitude. But "wow" seems to emphasize my point alot quicker. The way this is written really creates a strong emotion in the reader's heart/mind. It's a saddening poem that strikes a sense of loss and hopelessness into the reader, but also leaves a person to appreciate the life before the tragic end. I could maybe give you a line from this that really stands out, but no one line deserves more praise than another for they are all equally stunning. Keep Writing! ♥P.D. |
| lovelikeamixtape 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusethanks for sucking out my soul, now i can't ever be happy again. no seriously though. even though now i feel like crying, this is so beautiful; you're really talented. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so sad. But message well conveyed. It was -b e a u t i f u l-. Keep up the great work. =] |
| Faith Adeline 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseaw sad poem. Very good though. Keep up the good work. Faith |
| tearing hands 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and heartbreakingly sad. I love the lines "and he pretended he was doing good/ and she pretended he was doing good". |
| Shadow of Oblivion013 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow... I can just see the emotion coming out of this. Such poignancy, strife, and anguish. I can see it all... very wonderfully described, made me get a little tearful. Good job. ~Shadow |
| BeautifulAssassin 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseSo sad. just...amazing...keep wrting! |