thoughts which lay swimming aisle on one's mind which relaxing... disturbing, yes...

nice...

Good! I liked it. And just out of curiosity...how do you do the Japanese letters?

kAiRi Of UzEnIbA cLaN

This made me smile and think at the same time. The stanzas are in haiku form. I like this because it can be taken literally or figuratively. In literal sense, it takes me somewhere along the lines of bath time ^^. Figuratively, I'm still pondering about it. I notice your rhymes once again and it still has the natural feel to it. It flows well and makes me want to read it again. Beautiful job and I'm adding this to my faves.


-C.N

P.S Pardon the long review.