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Hed in the Cloudz
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseThat's awesome! In an "I-pity-the-fly" way. You've definitely caused a reaction, and it's a really good point that you're making. Who would have thought that flies were such good examples for the rest of us?
It's bothering me a bit that you assume that people just swat flies due to annoyance. I'll be an annoying know-it-all and point out that there are some species of flies that cause very serious diseases (I believe that the tsetse would be a key example?) and others that bite painfully. Perhaps you could clarify that it's a house fly that you're talking about?
--Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)
simpleplan13
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseinteresting... very true... a great point.. very unique idea... well done
Tytherpol
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abusethis is a really cool poem.
nice job.
laughing in her sleep
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abusewow.
interesting point.
i totally love this
what a way to look at things, if only
some of those melodramatic people
could look @ things through this point of view...
keep writing
none of burt's beeswax
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusedon't flies also vomit on whatever they land on though? and that's super gross. but still, i get what you're saying. maybe we are all too sensitive. but where would we be if we wouldn't. seriously, sometimes the drama is enough to live off of. sweet style.
Basara
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abusehumorous in a way...

nice...
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