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| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat's awesome! In an "I-pity-the-fly" way. You've definitely caused a reaction, and it's a really good point that you're making. Who would have thought that flies were such good examples for the rest of us? It's bothering me a bit that you assume that people just swat flies due to annoyance. I'll be an annoying know-it-all and point out that there are some species of flies that cause very serious diseases (I believe that the tsetse would be a key example?) and others that bite painfully. Perhaps you could clarify that it's a house fly that you're talking about? --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... very true... a great point.. very unique idea... well done |
| Tytherpol 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abusethis is a really cool poem. nice job. |
| laughing in her sleep 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusewow. interesting point. i totally love this what a way to look at things, if only some of those melodramatic people could look @ things through this point of view... keep writing |
| none of burt's beeswax 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusedon't flies also vomit on whatever they land on though? and that's super gross. but still, i get what you're saying. maybe we are all too sensitive. but where would we be if we wouldn't. seriously, sometimes the drama is enough to live off of. sweet style. |
| Basara 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusehumorous in a way... nice... |