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Hed in the Cloudz 5/24/08 . chapter 1That's awesome! In an "I-pity-the-fly" way. You've definitely caused a reaction, and it's a really good point that you're making. Who would have thought that flies were such good examples for the rest of us? It's bothering me a bit that you assume that people just swat flies due to annoyance. I'll be an annoying know-it-all and point out that there are some species of flies that cause very serious diseases (I believe that the tsetse would be a key example?) and others that bite painfully. Perhaps you could clarify that it's a house fly that you're talking about? -Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!) |
simpleplan13 10/1/07 . chapter 1interesting... very true... a great point.. very unique idea... well done |
Tytherpol 8/3/07 . chapter 1this is a really cool poem. nice job. |
just dani 7/14/07 . chapter 1wow. interesting point. i totally love this what a way to look at things, if only some of those melodramatic people could look things through this point of view... keep writing |
none of burt's beeswax 7/11/07 . chapter 1don't flies also vomit on whatever they land on though? and that's super gross. but still, i get what you're saying. maybe we are all too sensitive. but where would we be if we wouldn't. seriously, sometimes the drama is enough to live off of. sweet style. |
Basara 7/8/07 . chapter 1humorous in a way... nice... |