|Reviews for lessons from nature|
| Hed in the Cloudz 5/24/08 . chapter 1
That's awesome! In an "I-pity-the-fly" way. You've definitely caused a reaction, and it's a really good point that you're making. Who would have thought that flies were such good examples for the rest of us?
It's bothering me a bit that you assume that people just swat flies due to annoyance. I'll be an annoying know-it-all and point out that there are some species of flies that cause very serious diseases (I believe that the tsetse would be a key example?) and others that bite painfully. Perhaps you could clarify that it's a house fly that you're talking about?
-Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)
| simpleplan13 10/1/07 . chapter 1
interesting... very true... a great point.. very unique idea... well done
| Tytherpol 8/3/07 . chapter 1
this is a really cool poem.
| just dani 7/14/07 . chapter 1
i totally love this
what a way to look at things, if only
some of those melodramatic people
could look things through this point of view...
| none of burt's beeswax 7/11/07 . chapter 1
don't flies also vomit on whatever they land on though? and that's super gross. but still, i get what you're saying. maybe we are all too sensitive. but where would we be if we wouldn't. seriously, sometimes the drama is enough to live off of. sweet style.
| Basara 7/8/07 . chapter 1
humorous in a way...