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Hed in the Cloudz
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseGreat point! I love the straightforwardness and randomness-- it was certainly a surprise! Not to mention that the categorization (tragedy/mystery) will keep us readers thinking FOREVER about its potential double meaning...
But then, that double meaning that might be there makes me want more! I wish that you would add a little, to make it clear whether or not there is this other meaning, or at least some story behind it. Just a last line or something. I know that guessing is fun, but knowing can be more poignant, can't it?
--Yna, still from the Review Marathon, which is still linked in my profile!
heart'n'soul-of-ink
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abusehaha I like this
simpleplan13
2007-10-05
ch 1,
abuseI like this.. its true.. and the title is great... nicely done
diffident
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseAha! That's great. I love the straightforward way in which this is structured; it's very in-your-face and it gets the message across very bluntly, which suits this.

marie
none of burt's beeswax
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusecute. i love your style because it's so clear and simple, and is not all loaded down with heaviness or anything. levity, brevity...mmhmm, so perfect.
Broken Spiral
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseYour poem made me laugh in surprise. Tragic, sardonic, but a great parody of the headless-chicken reaction to saving resources. (That's what I got from it, anyway.) Nice job!
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