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| Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseGreat point! I love the straightforwardness and randomness-- it was certainly a surprise! Not to mention that the categorization (tragedy/mystery) will keep us readers thinking FOREVER about its potential double meaning... But then, that double meaning that might be there makes me want more! I wish that you would add a little, to make it clear whether or not there is this other meaning, or at least some story behind it. Just a last line or something. I know that guessing is fun, but knowing can be more poignant, can't it? --Yna, still from the Review Marathon, which is still linked in my profile! |
| heart'n'soul-of-ink 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusehaha I like this |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. its true.. and the title is great... nicely done |
| diffident 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAha! That's great. I love the straightforward way in which this is structured; it's very in-your-face and it gets the message across very bluntly, which suits this. marie |
| none of burt's beeswax 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusecute. i love your style because it's so clear and simple, and is not all loaded down with heaviness or anything. levity, brevity...mmhmm, so perfect. |
| Broken Spiral 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseYour poem made me laugh in surprise. Tragic, sardonic, but a great parody of the headless-chicken reaction to saving resources. (That's what I got from it, anyway.) Nice job! |