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| D L Dzioba 2007-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseThe note was not needed, God is as much a literary figure as he is a religious one. As for the poem, again The flow didn't pick up until a few lines in. |
| DiaRose 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseWONDERFUL! The rhyme scheme is so uniquely perfect! Love, ~Dia |
| Ramenluver 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this line "Mist in the mind I’ve murdered cold." the most. Very sad, but wonderful all the same. -Ramen |
| St-Jimmy1669 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseYou have a good voice for your emotions. Well done. |
| Lavender Dylan 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseYeah this is how I feel about fate most of the time.. Very well written, Great Job |
| x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abusethat was great... as well, you're an amazing writer... |