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concerto49 2007-07-12 . chapter 1
I guess everyone's had regrets, especially when they could have done something in the situation, yet ended up not doing so. I've sure had my share.

As this is based on the idea that you never spoke and hence there was no dialogue throughout, my opinion would be that the 'he' as he was not named should have said something yet you never replied - like explicitly in dialogue form.

Stoplight and blood, I have nothing against it - just is that being a bit too...anyways.
xDancingintheRainx 2007-07-12 . chapter 1
Wow. Absolutely heartbreaking. This piece was excellently written and the emotion is so strong. Excellent, excellent job! I'm adding this to my favorites.
DeadlySilent 2007-07-08 . chapter 1
O_O i loved it. So much. And i really hope this didn't happen to you. Because it would be awful.
katy 2007-07-07 . chapter 1
eh don't feel like signing in...

that was really really good. and sad.
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