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| Chach K. Whitton 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great. I can see myself connecting to your words, and the truth behind them. Your poems have the ability to capture the reader and invoke self-contemplation as well. In a time where I feel exactly as this poem describes, its nice to know someone else has crafted a character in which I can relate Thanx |
| Nagame 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. I enjoyed the imagery the words evoked: 'the fuse is ready to ignite' and 'intoxication steals my heart', especially. Nice work, as usual. Thanks! |
| Laurena 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseO_o...it twas deepish, i liked ur strong diction, u inspire me. |
| Agapantha 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved the way that some lines seemed to rhyme yet others didn't. It kinda made it feel more like a stressed stream of consciousness which completely related to what your poem was about - Perfect. Panths |
| BellaXedward 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseAWESOME!! i LOVE IT! |