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Reviews For: Weight Of the World

Chach K. Whitton
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is really great. I can see myself connecting to your words, and the truth behind them. Your poems have the ability to capture the reader and invoke self-contemplation as well. In a time where I feel exactly as this poem describes, its nice to know someone else has crafted a character in which I can relate
Thanx
Nagame
2008-04-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was good. I enjoyed the imagery the words evoked: 'the fuse is ready to ignite' and 'intoxication steals my heart', especially.

Nice work, as usual. Thanks!
Laurena
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseO_o...it twas deepish, i liked ur strong diction, u inspire me.
Agapantha
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved the way that some lines seemed to rhyme yet others didn't. It kinda made it feel more like a stressed stream of consciousness which completely related to what your poem was about - Perfect.

Panths
BellaXedward
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abuseAWESOME!! i LOVE IT!
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