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SpeedingCars8 2007-07-08 . chapter 1
yes this is a difficult topic. i've definitely written about things like this before. i liked how you mentioned hurt turning into anger. that's actually what happens to everyone. about any kind of grieving. for me it was a cycle when i wasn't over the guy. it was hurt, anger, sadness, hope, hurt, anger, etc.

its just a really hard concept of no understand why something changes and you feel like you're the only who cares. i completely relate to this poem.

there's a spelling error near the beginning and i'm not a fan of back-to-back line rhyming but i think it was really well structured anyhow.

i'll definitely be reading more of your work. keep it up!
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